为了进入一所好大学，我踏进高中的那一刻起就下定决心要努力学习。第一年，我交了很多新朋友，他们都很优秀，我想要向他们学习。

The moment I stepped in high school, I have made up my mind to study hard for the purpose to enter a good university. In the first year, I made a lot of new friends. All of them were so excellent that I wanted to learn from them. As the second year has come, I felt great pressure. My scores went up and down and I felt so worried. I told myself that I should find a way to relieve pressure. Listening to music was a good way. I would sing with the music and shake my body, which made me forget everything but the joyous music. Second, I would like to talk to my friends, because they understood me. We would have some tea in the shop and then shared our secrets. When we laughed out loudly, all the annoyance would disappear. 
为了进入一所好大学，我踏进高中的那一刻起就下定决心要努力学习。第一年，我交了很多新朋友，他们都很优秀，我想要向他们学习。第二年的到来，我感到了巨大的压力。我的成绩不稳定，我感到很担心。我告诉自己，要找到缓解压力的方式。听音乐是一个好方法，我会跟着音乐唱歌，晃动我的身体，这能使我忘记一切，享受着音乐的欢乐。第二，我会和我的朋友们聊聊天，因为他们能够理解我。我们会在店里喝点茶，然后分享我们的秘密。当我们大声笑出来时，所有的烦恼都会消失。