夏天是那么的热，都一个多月没下雨了，空气很闷。但是今天，雨终于来了。当我看到黑云时，我很高兴。

Summer is so hot. It hasn’t rained for more than one month and the air is so stuffy. But today, the rain finally comes. I am so happy when I see the dark cloud. It is so cool, when wind blows. The wind blow my face. When rain stops, I go out of the house and breathe the fresh air. What a comfortable day. 
夏天是那么的热，都一个多月没下雨了，空气很闷。但是今天，雨终于来了。当我看到黑云时，我很高兴。风刮了起来，很凉爽。风吹着我的脸。雨停后，我走出房子、呼吸新鲜的空气。多么舒服的一天啊。