最近，新闻报道来了一位自俄罗斯的女孩在工作的时候过世了。当我看到这个新闻时，我很震惊，因为她跟我是一样的年龄，但她多年前就已经开始了模特的职业生涯。

Recently, the news reported a girl from Russia died while she was doing her job. When I saw the news, I was so shocked, because she was the same age with me, but she had started her career as a model many years ago. She died of overwork. What a pity. A teenager should enjoy her childhood, and she should go to school and play with her friends. When we grow up, we will naturally come to the stage of earning money and struggle with life. Before that day comes, all we should do is to enjoy the free time. Missing the happy childhood time will be a great pity. 
最近，新闻报道来了一位自俄罗斯的女孩在工作的时候过世了。当我看到这个新闻时，我很震惊，因为她跟我是一样的年龄，但她多年前就已经开始了模特的职业生涯。她死于过度劳累。真的很遗憾。青少年就应该享受他的童年，她应该去上学，和她的朋友一起玩耍。等我们长大后，自然会来到挣钱的阶段，为生活而奋斗。在那一天到来之前，我们应该做的就是享受自由的时光。失去快乐的童年是一大遗憾。